Wednesday, 16 October 2013

Examplar Candidate J - Welsh Board


Cinematography

Mise En Scene

The use of the handheld camera
Close ups – intensity
House undergoing construction, good setting

Sound

Editing

Bad audio when talking into handheld camera
From too quiet to, to loud
Song is irrelevant
Bad transitions of shots, TV break up
Non – diegetic material misspelt “1 Hours later”

Macro comments –

Horror genre
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Grade/Level & Feedback

Level 3 lower
- Good setting for ending (House)
- Bad audio and sound
- Non diegetic material needs spelling correctly
 
 
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Again due to my partner not being there I had to take all the notes so there aren't as many as there could have been.

Monday, 14 October 2013

Examplar candidate C - Welsh Board


Cinematography

Mise En Scene

Close ups - Intense
Face painted, creepy
Knife – weapon used
Bedroom poorly decorated for film

Sound

Editing

Music matched genre
Childs voice, Horror convention
Church organ - eerie
Short snappy cuts
Black + white compliments eerie nature

Macro comments –

Horror genre
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Grade/Level & Feedback

Level 4
- Some very good shots E.g. the girl praying
- Editing short and snappy and very well done
- Could have done with more of a narrative
 
 
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There isn't a lot of information as I was supposed to be in a pair and we would both focus on two aspects, however my pair did not turn up so I had to do all four aspects in just two screenings.

Thursday, 10 October 2013

Title of our Film

We have decided that we will call our film "Hash", this is because it is the surname of our main character and it is also a nickname for weed which is the drug which causes all the trouble for Billy during the film.

This is what our title will look like as it shows it very distorted and this is what is the theme throughout our film as within the film it shows the main character feeling very distorted and the title really compliments this.



Monday, 7 October 2013

A look at a previous students short film

In order to get an idea of what to do with my short film I am looking at a previous wyke students short film, Riley Wong, I am looking at Riley's as I have seen it before and thoroughly enjoyed it and he also got a very good grade. I am watching his film 'Avarice' and seeing how many shots are in each scene as although my film will have more of a dark side to it, I believe the structure of Riley's film matches mine well.
 


In the opening scene of Riley's film, it starts off very slowly as the opening scene lasts 1 minute 55 seconds and within this time period there are only 23 shots that take place. This means each shot lasts on average 5 seconds which is a long time for a single shot, this allows us as the audience to get into the film slowly and not rush straight into the main angle of the film.

The second scene has a much faster pace to it as the 1 minute and 13 seconds that it is on the screen for, it has 28 shots, so in a shorter time period it has an extra 5 shots, this means each shot is on the screen for an average of 2.6 seconds, this means the pace has just about doubled as it is showing you the item that is going to be the main body of the film and showing you that this item will lead to the climax.

The third scene is incredibly fast, I counted 32 shots in a time period of 38 seconds and i'm not sure whether I may have missed a couple of shots so it could have been more, this means however that each shot was on the screen on average for 1.2 seconds, this again has doubled in pace from the last scene, Riley has done this to show that the jar doubling her money has gone to her head and she is rushing into stupid decisions.

The fourth and final scene returns back to a slower pace as it has 15 shots in 47 seconds that means each shots last on average 3.1 seconds, this is to show that her power has stopped and the jar has taken away her priveledge as she has become greedy.

Wednesday, 2 October 2013

The narrative theory for our film

We are using the Narrative theory by syd field.
 
This is because each of the points within the structure match incidents within our film, The inciting incident would be the protagonist coming home from work after a busy week, the plot point 1 will be the protagonist deciding to have a few beers, the pinch 1  will be finishing the beers and deciding to do drugs, the midpoint would be actually doing the drugs, the pinch 2 would be the friend coming round and disturbing the protagonist, plot point 2 would be the protagonist actually killing his friend, and finally the climax would be the protagonist finding out that what he'd done wasn't a dream and deciding what he should do.